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Chinese
We got a kitten, Siamese
my little sister could only grok Chinese
hence his name.
As a kitten I saw him stalk
a kookaburra,
twice his body weight.
This predator bird could have killed him,
with a peck
or the more traditional method,
carry him to a height and drop him.
but instead played.
Each time he quivered his little bottom
and pounced,
kooka elegantly lifted,
just enough,
to let the kit fly
through empty space,
confused
and come back for more.
It went on for an hour.
I found my animal souls.
He grew unspeyed
to be a warrior
in the tradition of his ancestors.
He killed at will,
our neighbours mourned and resented,
their missing lovelies,
but who can prove a cat?
He knew one word of English,
snake
whenever he heard the word
he would go,
into the bush
and come back with his prize.
Most grateful cats bring mice and lizards.
He was not grateful,
he knew his worth.
He brought back
tiger snakes,
black snakes,
most deadly of all brown ones.
As trophies.
sure he got bitten,
would sleep for three days and go out hunting.
sure he got hurt,
when possum bites got infected
he came back from the vet
shaved from head to haunch
a scar crossed fighter,
Frankenstein cat!
I loved him for his entire lack of sycophancy
He want attention?
He climb up you claw by claw.
He don’t?
Don’t even try.
Hear this!
He sat be-sunning himself in the driveway.
Alsation cat-killer came pounding up roaring.
Chinese sat.
To the last possible moment,
and calmly took its nose off
with one swipe.
alsation fleeing screetching.
Chinese sunning.
He liked pot.
Would jump onto my desk when I blazed up
and sit in front,
inhaling
and if i played The Doors or Bowie
he would lean against the speaker,
rocking.
Chinese got ill.
Couldn’t eat,
vomitted a lot,
finally vet said,
leukemia.
I held him in my arms as the fatal yellow shot went in.
I felt him leave.
I have never had a better human friend.
Critiques
Conect11
18 years 6 months ago
such a staunch friend,
rbridgeman
18 years 6 months ago
Chinese (comments)
purplemoondoll
18 years 8 months ago
This is Brilliant
weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
Thanks Kaz
wolfycat
18 years 8 months ago
"I have never had a better human friend"
IKnowNoBox
18 years 8 months ago
A feline familiar fitting for You my Friend
Ink Dragon
18 years 7 months ago
our childhood friends
DeWaal
18 years 7 months ago
Crtitique on Chinese
weirdelf
18 years 7 months ago
Wow! thankyou for your thoughtful comments
DeWaal
18 years 7 months ago
Improving the poem
Mark
18 years 7 months ago
Am on verge of tears here
waterdragon
18 years 7 months ago
I think I'm turning
orgami
18 years 7 months ago
plot by plot
waterdragon
18 years 7 months ago
Anything
orgami
18 years 7 months ago
yes this is it
Lex_Le Belle M…
18 years 7 months ago
Well now,
RSScheerer
18 years ago
And I cried reading it
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Jess, Visiting Chinese’
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
Anna
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Rett, since then I have 2
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
Jess
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Jess
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Very touching
weirdelf
17 years 8 months ago
thanks all for thoughts and comments
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Smiles for miles … love JC
Skybones777
16 years 2 months ago
i love my calco cat