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weirdelf
weirdelf
Oct 12, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Kerouac haiku

He passed

and we passed him

never lingering

— weirdelf, Oct 12, 2007

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Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 8 months ago

Makes one curious

Who is being passed? This evokes so many different possibilities that they are nearly endless. Clever and intelligent use of words in simple Haiku form! Ronda
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Quillsvein1

18 years 8 months ago

mysterious

neat little haiku. when i read this i smelt rain, thought of a guy about to unwisely pick up a hitchhiker, have no idea why. nice.
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Conect11

18 years 8 months ago

perhaps

the hitchhiker because of Kerouac's propensity for road poems? Mark W.
Mark

Mark

18 years 7 months ago

wow this is

so subjective lol Where do I want to go with it? Hey I'm all over the place with this and love it hmmm "Mad Jack" was certainly all over the place lol