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Common Bonds

Everywhere I go, I see someone I think I know.

Whispers of the past materialize in the many faces of humanity.

Familiarity resides in the faces of those I see.

Though one thousand miles from home…

On an aspen-covered hillside, the golden fall coming through my door…

I swear, I’ve seen you before.

 

As I glance across the room in the heavy, shaded gloom…

Of the dimly lit restaurant,

I think I know you. I identify with your existence,

Of the many joys, your dissapointments, the strife…

Your magnificent, awesome life.

The smell of home-cooked food permeates the air,

And suddenly…I become aware.

You look at me from across the room, with understanding,

And I am almost sure that I have seen you before.

 

The beauty of the lines that crease your hands,

The sweat that forms above your brow.

As we look at each other, questioning.

Have I seen you on a busy, crowded street,

Or on a snow-covered mountain retreat.

Traces of footsteps floating amidst the pines,

Deep, snowy footprints forming jagged, crusty lines.

I really can’t explain how…

But, I know for sure I’ve seen you now.

 

Walking this complicated road of life,

We’re so different, yet the same.

Forked, winding paths, Some of the same fears.

Living through joys, sorrows, and tears.

Wondering…how many years.

 

Will we make a difference on this battered planet where we live.

Will we ever learn to give.

Shall we go through life with indifference on our faces.

Let’s make a difference while we have a chance.

Let’s live, and love, and laugh, and dance.

Let’s exist until we can’t.

There’s no more room for regrets.

They will not another day get.

Don’t let despair ever get in the way,

And live as if all of our tomorrows are brand new todays.

 

Catherine M. Howell

10/8/07

 

 

— wolfycat, Oct 11, 2007

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

The theme is drawing me,

never seen such a theme ....or did I? In ink, David ps you will get feed back on this gem in the rough. Maybe the title is not introducing me to this poem. I look forward to it's return from crystalis.
wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 8 months ago

Thank you.

Thank you for taking the time to read this 'gem in the rough.' I do appreciate the comments and your opinion on the title. Wolfycat.
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purplemoondoll

18 years 8 months ago

Another stunning Poem

Wolfy you have a wonderful way with words and this is so thought provoking. Again this is a theme I can relate to closely. Shall we go through life with indifference on our faces. Indifference is the disease that sadly seems to be becoming more and more widespread. Let’s make a difference while we have a chance. Let’s live, and love, and laugh, and dance. Let’s exist until we can’t. I applaud the message in these lines. Excellent writing, I look forward to seeing more. Kaz x
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purplemoondoll

18 years 8 months ago

PS

I agree the title could be improved. Its a great poem but the title doen't do it justice! Kaz x
wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 8 months ago

Thanks for the input.

Thank you, also, for your input on title. I am going to have to brainstorm today and see if I can come up with something better suited. Best Wishes, Wolfy.
wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 8 months ago

Thank You Kaz X

Indifference is a disease, and I like the way you put it. It seems at times that everyone is out for themselves. Again, thank you for your comments, and for reading what I have written. Wolfy.
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

This really spoke to me

gently and allusively, of our commonality. However, I don't think you quite make the connection between the body of the poem and the last stanza. It's almost like they are separate poems. I see the connection you are trying to make but I think you could integrate it more. Just a thought, cheers, Jess
wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 8 months ago

You know Jess...

I actually thought the same thing when I finished it. I have been thinking of how to finish it in a better way... not sure yet. Thanks for the ideas. Best Wishes, Wolfy.
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follettvogue

18 years 8 months ago

poem.

paula buckenham a poem filled with visions, familiarity, and the urge to unite together in the world , i see all sorts of images oozing out at me while reading this poem, it stretches my imagination, very good poem and good blend of words. follettvogue.
wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 8 months ago

Mountainous New Mexico...

Is what inspired me to finally write this poem. Thank you so much for reading my poem and for leaving me a comment!! Wolfycat.