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Oct 15, 2007
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Why I Love You
When I first saw your face and the
happiness emitting from
your eyes, they were
illuminating all of our surroundings,
leaving me blinded by
our connection to one another
Vaguely understanding what was happening in my heart
everyone else could clearly see
you were giving yourself to me completely, leaving
optimists reason to believe in their dreams
undoubtedly our souls are connected.
Comments
wolfycat
18 years 6 months ago
Just the way it is...
JulieMcCarty
18 years 6 months ago
Thanks Wolfy
wolfycat
18 years 6 months ago
One word...
JulieMcCarty
18 years 6 months ago
Thanks Wolfy
IKnowNoBox
18 years 6 months ago
Or try a Quik verse with
IKnowNoBox
18 years 6 months ago
I applaud your use of Why I love you
JulieMcCarty
18 years 6 months ago
Thanks Box
IKnowNoBox
18 years 6 months ago
Any time
Darknlovely3436
16 years 2 months ago
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