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Oct 10, 2007
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A river will flow in this desert too
A river will flow in this desert too
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Now it may be a desert but one day a river will flow in this desert too Then it will have green trees and birds and with a happy noise of ignorant kids Now it may be hot and dry to live but on that day of riverflow every thing will be changed Now it may be lonely and isolated from all but in the second of riverflow a huge crowd will be here Their noise and talks will tear the sky too Up to that second ,It will wait for that flow As the sufferings of a noble souls It will have to wait for that flow. That day will come to wet that land and to gather a big mass with green pleassures Sakthi Ravichandran— SAKTHEEE2007, Oct 10, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
You speak with the voice of the land
SAKTHEEE2007
18 years 8 months ago
Thank you Jess
weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
magnanimous implies