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A river will flow in this desert too

 A river will flow in this desert too

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Now it may be a desert  but one day a river will flow in this desert too Then it  will have green trees and birds and with a happy noise of ignorant kids Now it may be hot and dry to live but on that day of riverflow every thing will be changed Now it may be lonely and isolated from all but in the second of riverflow a huge crowd will be here Their noise and talks will tear the sky too Up to that second ,It will wait for that flow As the sufferings of a noble souls It will have to wait for that flow. That day will come to wet that land and to gather a big mass with green pleassures         Sakthi Ravichandran
— SAKTHEEE2007, Oct 10, 2007

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SAKTHEEE2007

18 years 8 months ago

Thank you Jess

Dear Jess Thank you for your comment.you are very magnanimus and great. Really I am very lucky to have your comments Sakthee
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weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

magnanimous implies

magnanimous implies bestowing favours from a great height, like a king. I do not presume to that. You are a fellow poet and brother, we agree and disagree, no-one has higher status, respectfully, Jess