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Ink Dragon
Oct 13, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Coffee charms

 Coffee charm I

Caffeine
Odour
Fragrance
Flavour
Endless
Energy

Coffee charm II

Cherish the warmth

Obviate exhaustion

Feast on the colour

Falsify alertness

Encounter the taste

Entailed addiction guaranteed

 

 

 

 

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barbsdad2003

18 years 6 months ago

How About?

How about changing the last line to read, in its entirety ... Guarantee addiction ... Mightn't that be more consistent with the prior lines? Suggestion here, not demand. In appreciation of your wisdom, your insights, Chuck
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Ink Dragon

18 years 6 months ago

Thank you

so much for your suggestion, but I´d be on the wrong side of the acrostic then, you see? But I´ll think of something else, because your comment suggests that it isn´t quite in the flow, that last line...ID
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barbsdad2003

18 years 6 months ago

Sorry

By that point in the story I'd lost all track of the acrosticity factor. My bad. Yours, Chuck