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Oct 05, 2007
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Life's Massage
When you wish upon a star
but the star’s way up in space,
and you wouldn’t know a wish
if it were staring you in the face;
when you’re dieing just to live
and really living just to die,
when you’re trying to really give
but no one else gives you a try;
that’s when you understand your luck
though luck can’t understand your ways,
like how you wile away your nights
after hoping all your days;
when you just live to dodge your fears
yet still fear what you can’t dodge,
that’s when things rub you all wrong
and we call that "life’s massage".
— docmaverick, Oct 05, 2007
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follettvogue
18 years 8 months ago
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weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
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