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Ink Dragon
Oct 09, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Chocolate charm

Chew me


Hack away at my body

Open your mouth
Cram me into it

Open your senses

Lick me up
And savour the flavour

Taste my sweet bitterness

Eat me at once!

 

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

Careful the fairy golom tamer will eat this poem...

right off the page. I have tolled on this very challenge,you have knocked it out . Got my Sweet tooth ID. Careful there are diabetics around here!!!!! I'll Savor the flavor,of this acrostic chocolate verses. In crayon, Dabbler(No Box)
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Ink Dragon

18 years 7 months ago

Sweet tooth

all right! Chocolate is a cunning seducer... Glad you enjoyed it! ID
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 7 months ago

Strong Acrostic

Another nicely done Acrostic. Still doesn't sound forced, although that chocolate sounds mighty demanding! Love, RS
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Conect11

18 years 7 months ago

wow,

as someone who absolutely ABHORES chocolate I enjoyed this clever little acrostic for its wit and punch. Funny enough, though it reminded me of the cow in "Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy!" Mark W.
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Ink Dragon

18 years 7 months ago

I haven´t thought

of the "Hitchhiker´s guide to the galaxy" in ages. I really should reread it...Thanks for jogging my memory! ID
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 7 months ago

some of my favourite quotes ever come from those books

"The Vogon destructor fleet hung in the upper atmosphere in exactly the same way bricks don't" "In face of danger he goes to pieces so quickly people get hit by the shrapnel" At one time I had a collection of the original BBC radio performances, could probably sell them on Ebay for a fortune, but lost them in custody to a break-up. Such a tragedy Adams died so young. I feel he could have gone on forever, even more creatively than Pratchett (at one time I thought they were the same writer using pseudonyms) cheers, Jess
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Ink Dragon

18 years 7 months ago

Terry Pratchett

still rocks! In fact, his books are getting better and better, because his characters develop over time, and I just ADORE his allusions to our real world. Terry Pratchett got me started on learning proper English, not just the school stuff. When I first read one of his books in English, I noticed how many puns couldn´t be translated into German, and from then on, I have only ever read them in English, which added considerably to my vocabulary...But, as I said, I really must reread Douglas Adams. I last read a book by him when I was 19...
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Jillian Botha

18 years 7 months ago

Knowing my love for Chocolate....

Hi Ink Dragon This poem spoke direcly to my sweet tooth!!! :-) the "Fairy Golom Tamer" that i am, i did almost eat this one up!!! Thank you for this, it really really made my day. Kind regards Feebie!!! Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)
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Ink Dragon

18 years 7 months ago

I am thrilled

that my poem made your day! Regards, ID P.S: I do eat loads of chocolate, but I try not to dwell on my mistakes, I rather fashion them into a piece of poetry to get them out of my head...Is that therapeutical writing?
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Jillian Botha

18 years 7 months ago

I would say a definite yes!!!!

Hi Ink I would say a definite yes to that! For me it is very therapeutic to write when all my thoughts are in turmoil. So you are 100% right in that respect!! kind regards Feebie Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

I Echo the Tamer of Goloms

Definite Yes,People are alive today because poetry made me use poetic insight instead of fist,anger Management Poetry (note to self ) Thanks Ink Dragon and Fairy! In ink, Dabbler
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follettvogue

18 years 7 months ago

poem chocolate charm.

paula buckenham yummy poem, nice enough to eat, i would have named it indulge. few words but ime satisfied now i just ate a chocolate bar lol. follettvogue
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

Ok I'll ask The obvious Question

What Is Your choice Chocolate (and where can I get it?)mine is a limited release milk chocolate Geraddelie(sic) Chocolate I don't have the name they maker it once every 3 years..
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bjp

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Nina,

Edgy poetry. Very nice. May I have some more, please! Brian
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Ink Dragon

16 years 4 months ago

*hands a large slab of chocolate to Brian*

Dear Brian, more chocolate or more poems? Thank you for visiting one of my beloved charms, there are many more floating around here. I still come back to this little project from time to time, it is such joy to write these short "trick" poems. Yours, ~Nina
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Arrow

16 years 4 months ago

Ha!

I'm at a loss for words. I'm more of a "suck me" than a "chew me" kind of (chocolate) lover but to each their own. Hahahahaha! :)
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Ink Dragon

16 years 4 months ago

Hoo!

(Sorry, couldn't resist the owl pic, Arrow!) A chocolate sucker... who'd have thought so? (Are we all being ambiguous today or are we?) Yours, ~Nina