Writing frenzy

It is easy to answer all your requests in just a few words. It's all great! I think it is pretty much universally discriptive - great poetry. I even smiled and thought of the weather my lines and stanzas (sometimes too stormy lol) I'm grateful you wrote this. Thanks, Mark

Thank my muse I kept notes and my wall turned yellow with post-it notes.I personally enjoy the Buzzin' feeling this poem relates to me. In ink, Dabbler ps have been inspired by this poem to do a weird performance instalation art piece 'E-Motion' Wow! the buzz.

not just for the frenzy of words, but for your pro-active muse. (I suspect mine is seeing someone else, the slut) cheers, Jess

I think that all of us can relate to this piece. The way you lulled into a silence in the first stanza and then slowly picked up speed again until the end was impressive, too. A very nicely written piece!

Excellent continuity super theme and delivery

As always - I love your work dragon. This is brilliant especially these lines:- The waves are generated By a storm of ratio Rushing waves Crush the dam This is definitely one of my favourites. Nice work. Kaz x

DDCdogood The analogy is right on, it's like the sub-text of, the conjuring of a writer, exellent. One thing tho, about 'Scribbling hastily away', a little redundant or repetitive. Scribbling means, hastily written; staight from the dictionary. But still, great conjure. Maybe, 'Scribbling away hastily', you know? 'gotta keep em' seperated':) Respectfully DDC

I.D., T-riffic. I could feel the rush and pull of the verses. Well written, and very relatable. wcw

Thanks for this. If there is a poem to which I relate it is this one. In fact I wrote a somewhat similar piece on another site entitled "The Diary of a Poet" - I think that was the title - which expressed how I keep coming back to express myself. Of course where you maintain a positive note, I become negative to say how my writing - at times - depresses and "I swore never to write again" and I try very hard to quell thses voices in my head but I am compelled by an inner force to keep writing. Thanks once again ... Leonard

glad you are here with these words...the need to write it down is uncontrollable for me as well... doesn't matter at the time whether it makes sense or rhymes or even if I like it... just know I have to do it... like you do... Richard

Dear Nina, I hope you don't mind, I am putting my foot in the door, having a look around while you're not looking! Like a wheel set in'TO' motion, its fine without the TO I think? The second waves could be waters to avoid repetition. Yours Ann