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IKnowNoBox
Oct 02, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A seductresses surrender

Consume me
Take me Trace my lips
And make me immortal with your kiss..
Make me yours.. Caress my cheeks, And wipe away my tears.. Stroke my breasts… And take my heart into your hands… Consume me Take me Look into my eyes… And fill me with passion… Burn me to cinders.. Ignite my flame… And make me yours…
— IKnowNoBox, Oct 02, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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JulieMcCarty

18 years 8 months ago

IS IT

HOT IN HERE.. or is it just me? whoa nice,nice, nice :) Julie
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follettvogue

18 years 8 months ago

poem

paula buckenham loved the build up of events in this poem, it evoked sensual images and erotic tones too, was wanting to read on but it ended just before the climax, pity, fab poem paula .