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IKnowNoBox
Oct 02, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Senuryu

  Sprouted seedlings

crushed under heavy footsteps

only wounded

— IKnowNoBox, Oct 02, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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purplemoondoll

18 years 8 months ago

Wounded but bound to rise again!

I like the rhythm and pacing and love the imagery. It's a great theme and says it all for me! Kaz x