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IKnowNoBox
Oct 02, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

senyru

  Infinite space

beyond grasp,within our reach

one grain of sand

— IKnowNoBox, Oct 02, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Conect11

18 years 8 months ago

lovin

the minimalism of this haiku, though I personally would use "my" rather than "your." Mark W.
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

Perhaps Our?

I believe that was in the second draft. Thank you for the suggestion,that is why I like Neo In ink, David
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follettvogue

18 years 8 months ago

poem.

paula buckenham short but bringing me images from it, building your patch, owning a little space, striving to the future, i see all sorts from these few words, nice poem follettvogue