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Oct 02, 2007
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Who am i?
Who am I?
Who am i? and
what is my role to play
What for i have been created and
who is my creator?
I played as a child for few years and
as a boy for few years
I was taught to live with some lines and
coupled me with a girl for sex and kids.
My runs and chasings back to money for
fulfilling the desires of my girl and kids
H e changed my role as a man with grey hair and
a weak bones with pains
Nothing has given to others and
nothing has recieved from Him
What for this life and
What is His desire
Let the great soul may help me
to know with in my sleep.
Sakthi Ravichandran
— SAKTHEEE2007, Oct 02, 2007
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barbsdad2003
18 years 8 months ago
Ravi:
SAKTHEEE2007
18 years 8 months ago
Thank you THATHA
IKnowNoBox
18 years 8 months ago
Yes friend