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Who am i?

    Who am I?

Who am  i?  and

what is my  role to play

What for i have been created and

who is my creator?

I played as a child  for few years and

as a boy for few years

I was taught to live with some lines and

coupled me with a girl for sex and kids.

My runs and chasings back to money  for

fulfilling the desires of my girl and kids

H e changed my role as a man with grey hair and

a weak bones with pains

Nothing has given to others and

nothing has recieved from Him

What for this life and

What  is  His desire

Let the great soul may  help me

to know with in my sleep.

 

Sakthi Ravichandran

— SAKTHEEE2007, Oct 02, 2007

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barbsdad2003

18 years 8 months ago

Ravi:

Such tortured questions often lie at the heart of good poetry. Congratulations ... and thanx, Grandpa
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SAKTHEEE2007

18 years 8 months ago

Thank you THATHA

Dear THATHA, THATHA it menas grandpa in my mother tongue Tamil Please take care on your health and yours family Bye Thatha
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

Yes friend

That all be fufilled to there need.as they may fufill others. A leason well versed Sakkthee. A friend, David