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IKnowNoBox
Sep 30, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Again,What Fiend?

Broke me out of pocket,
as my accountant.
Ate a few friends,
as my social companion.
Lead me to Death,
as an obsession

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 30, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Quillsvein1

18 years 8 months ago

that

dirty laundry could have such power! as robert lowell said in that sick and beautiful poem "suicide": "even bad cooking/can destroy a day.." this is very inventive, though for the sake of readership understanding i might make it a little longer. nice job!
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

Thank you Quill

It is a part two. I am aimed at a joining of the two. Frost I Think chutney (just to avoid cliche)LLaL In ink, Dabbler