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IKnowNoBox
Sep 30, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I See/Feel You

Twisted Autumn moon
Your tendriles
Tickle my innards,
like the feast of hibernation. How you pull me inward
— IKnowNoBox, Sep 30, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 7 months ago

I like this!

This has a haunting effect to it. The last two lines are making me think... Wolfy.
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

This was written straight after I awoke

I had a dream I was being pulled to the moon. I enjoy the Harvest Feast.We must put things in order before the winter,our house and our body. Glad you mentioned the effect,now I know I'm not the only one. In ink, Dabbler
wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 7 months ago

Dreams...

I had a vivid dream one night and started a painting... the beauty I saw. I must finish it. Maybe it will turn out like your poem! I hope so. Wolfy.
wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 7 months ago

I used to dislike winter...

Then I learned to own my seasonal sorrow and depression. It can actually be quite comforting...we have a fireplace and a wood stove! I love it!! Wolfy.