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IKnowNoBox
Sep 30, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Carcass Of Danger -One night only-

  Midnight showing in a  theature,long closed.

  the marqee still  beckons  voyeurs  morbid

  into a spook,and spew gore world

                     -Sold Out-

 

 

 

 

 

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 30, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Mark

Mark

18 years 8 months ago

Hi David

in the second line here do you mean beckons and voyeurs or beacons voyeurs - voyuers not a word. NOW reading it all I know you mean Beacons voyeurs :-) Fix that and it's a great one ! Let me know OK :-) mark
Mark

Mark

18 years 8 months ago

Yes!

Nice Nice Mark thanks for getting back to me
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orgami

18 years 7 months ago

purr of the eye

yes and subtle smoking extended over the seat ahead red heater glowing ash dripping down on the gummy dark floor nicotine fingers smeared with hot butter grease eyes drawing all the action in You have caught the moment here well ..O..