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IKnowNoBox
Sep 29, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

To see the circa

             Everyone almost came,

              to peek at The Show

         that was some what so so

               it was a nice show.

              (  Or so I was told.)

 

                    

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 29, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Conect11

18 years 8 months ago

huh

had to read this twice, and the cleverness really came through the second time. I like that you said everyone ALMOST came. I am taken aback and think to myself "why did they almost come? What stopped them?" The way you end it is really clever too. Mark W.
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

Circa the fire

We nearly had it lite,ran out of matches to feed it. Close . Thanks Mark In ink, David