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EIGHTH WONDER

Eigth wonder

The surface of her eyes are wet and

the eyeballs move tocreate wonders

The nose below her eyes is sharp and

it resembles the ancient artistic sculptures

The rosy lips which is very apt to her face

recollects the lines of poetry Lotus

Her neck,

an extraordinary creation of my Creator

Enough.

She is a eighth wonder of this world

 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Sep 28, 2007

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

Sakkthee my friend

With only minor editing needed. I would submit this Tribute for publication, as I have never read a poem such as this!Bravo my friend. In ink, David