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Stunning

 

You stop my heart

Just a clicking tock

Of this half broken clock

Futility shattered

Life worth living

Another chance I am given

I have no clue the how & the why

You seem so serene

But a reflective smile I do beam

Jarring sense that this is all for nothing

Once more we put off the day we will meet

A conclusion again I must greet

 

— Frost Smith, Sep 27, 2007

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

' Just a clicking tock'

'A conclusion again I must agree' In life there are so many waits holding us down ,how you captured it here is 'Stunning' Stunned, David