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Sep 28, 2007
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My First Venture into the Style of Haiku
Predawn—tea, hot;
growing
towards cold.
Spider, watchful,
has all eyes staying
glued.
Haiku master
fondling
sweet mistress—haiku.
Mozart
drawing me well
inward.
Backyard blue jays chatting—
what about is
not one knowing.
Single empty teacup—
guarding delicately
green saucer.
Last haiku—
tonight quitting now;
sleep beginning.
First time
venturing—
haiku.
Preferring comments
agreeably
encouraging.
Comments
IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
Hard time finding the lines
barbsdad2003
18 years 7 months ago
I Speak as a Beginner Here