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Tragedy of human nature
Tragedy of human nature
The fickleness of human nature never ceases to amaze
it is at its worst at the best of times
and at its best at the worst of times
oh human nature, what a stunning prospect
I think at times, when i look around me
i am here, the mere observer, watching, waiting
yet, human nature, it continues to disappoint
look at the past transgressions of our forefathers
murder, hate, revenge, the sneakiness of the human mind
the vindictiveness of the human heart
all this a part of you, and yes a part of me
but what makes each one of us different to the next?
What makes you cross boundaries and lines
that for me are a forbidden line to cross
what makes you put all vengeful thoughts into practice
whereas i would rather just think, yes just think
what it…just what if i had to cross that boundary
what would happen….yes what would happen if i did?
Would i get off scott free like you constantly do?
Would my conscience not scream and rebuke me?
Is this what stops me from crossing that line?
These are questions that we each ask every time
we hear of a murder, an atrocity put down to times of war
but, will we ever find the much needed answers?
There will come a time, when we will all have this question
along with many others answered, and we will then know
until then, it is clarity, explanations we seek
until then, blood will continue to flow
Critiques
IKnowNoBox
18 years 8 months ago
Yes the last two stanzas in a new poem will find a home
IKnowNoBox
18 years 8 months ago
You have elimanated the Tangent in it and It Has come through