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IKnowNoBox
Sep 21, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A Different Kind Of Sun Rise

   Just before the traffiic builds

  a beam of light shines into here

  illuminating the present nothing

       light   without   meaning

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 21, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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barbsdad2003

18 years 8 months ago

A Great Piece

At first blush, this requires thought. At second blush, not at all. At third blush, on the other hand .... A great piece. Love your brevities. Your style. Your smarts. Thanx, Chuck
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

This is a sublime manifestation

upon waking ,I changed it ,rearranged it ,poked,and proded it.in the end it stayed as is, with the spelling done last. You both have giving me insight most needed ,possible to a key dream I've been having. thank you, in ink, David
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waterdragon

18 years 8 months ago

Meaningless Light

I love the simplicity of understanding that nothing means anything except what we assign, and even then, it still means nothing. Good one! Reverend Bec Hudson Shine Your Light It's the ONLY Way to Get Rid of the Darkness!