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IKnowNoBox
Sep 21, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I Found a Gate to Purgatory

      And to it myself commited

 For petty sins  I have commited

 

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 21, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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JulieMcCarty

18 years 8 months ago

Thank the Lord

I love to hear those words! I hope no one would want to be in purgatory. I think this poem is a little creepy, making me have thoughts I do not want to have but I do like that it has me thinking :) Julie
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

To face my Fate in a dose

taken at my own pace.That all escape artist may know it possible. Consequence is unavoidable,yet we can do our pentance on our own,in "purgatory" there is no distraction from Leisure or false comforts.(i.e. T.V.) To Purge ones self of that which keeps us from acenssion. Thank you Julie. In ink, David