Neopoet

Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

I
IKnowNoBox
Sep 20, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Purgatory Inc.

            

          All  luxuries are

            Out Of Order

         Comfort  and Care

           Out Of  Service

    The Complaint Department

           Out To Lunch

         "Enjoy your visit,

            Next please"

 

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 20, 2007

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

More from this author

Critiques

P

purplemoondoll

18 years 8 months ago

Made me Smile

This reminds me of the days when I worked for local government. Nice work. Kaz x
I

IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

"Now processing reply # 42

#42 to window E. Please." Thank you Nobel Luna Doll, In ink, Dabbler esq. Agent of Purgatory ps. At less,purgatory is routine. at most, it is monotonous
J

JulieMcCarty

18 years 8 months ago

This made me

chuckle out loud! Are you sure you are not talking about my house? I like it, like it lots :) Julie
E

Eveliina

18 years 8 months ago

Your writen purgatory...

gives me great a great visual image...:) " in the end, we will only just remember how it feels..."