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Rewind
I’m sorry ‘bout last night
but honey, it’s a new day;
I know I didn’t act quite right
but please don’t push my heart away…
..after all the times we had, didn’t the good outweigh the bad?
I didn’t mean to be unkind, how I wish today, that I could hit rewind.
Don’t doubt my love is true
‘cause my love will never fade,
I don’t know what I’d ever do
if I lost you over a tirade…
..’cause after all the times we’ve had, didn’t the good outweigh the bad?
I didn’t mean to be unkind, how I wish today, that I could hit rewind.
So tell me how you’ve been
the years have sure been kind to you,
so glad we remained friends
but I sure miss the closeness, too…
..and after all the times we had, didn’t the good outweigh the bad?
I don’t know what went through my mind, how I wish today, that I could hit rewind.
Critiques
IKnowNoBox
18 years 8 months ago
And the asides rewind as we hope to replay the past we never ...