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JulieMcCarty
Sep 19, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Good night

 

 

Just one more cigarette and I’m off to bed

a full day tomorrow  lies ahead

So many things I don’t want to do

I would rather stay awake and converse with you

I’m not tired but I must sleep

so many appointments I have to keep

Good night all, we will talk again

Thank you all for being good friends

 

 

 

 

 

— JulieMcCarty, Sep 19, 2007
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the_poet_tree

18 years 10 months ago

Eye

really like this poem. Simple words, but they explain so much. Keep 'em coming Julie.
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purplemoondoll

18 years 10 months ago

Aye

This is a lovely little verse, written from the heart. 'Thank you all for being good friends'. Thank you for sharing this. Kaz x
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 10 months ago

I sent a regiment

of toy soldiers to guard your dream realm .Did you see them? In The Umbra, Dabbler

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