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IKnowNoBox
Sep 19, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Plug

this poem is brought to you

by Corrupt Endorsement

The same company that brought you...

A mind block
A brain lock

Bold Ads

Brand News

Designed to INFORM

Created to REMIND

The Dumbed Masses

of wantings,and longings

comforting slogans

to assure consumers

fad status never fades

(it only changes labels)

as long as they buy

to the tune of

product jingles

 

 

 

 

 

 

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 19, 2007

About This Poem

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

Still tuned....

got me you bastard! You should write copy for an advertising agency, although you would probably last about a New York second. cheers, Jess
F

frangipangi

18 years 4 months ago

PLUG

Great work Box. So streamlined and modern. VIP room only. yours, Fran
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 4 months ago

Thanks I felt it is about as close

as I get to slam poetry.It was a structure draft for a while that I went back and refreshed that is why I like the revision feature here at Neopoet.Jess Weird Elf has helped me find styles and i always get helpful feed back from him a mentor...so when I found out they had a mentor program up their sleeves I got excited to think that others will define and hone their talents as well. My progress here at Neopoet comes with reading the poems of others as well as the comments about their poems.I hope you find examples that inspire you here as well. In ink, Dabbler
Mark

Mark

18 years 4 months ago

Rant

Style and grace in a rant? Nice Nice ! or it would be at least a pet peeve of mine except for my all time fav - "Some times ya feel like a nut, some times ya don't." On the dashboard, Mark
themoonman

themoonman

18 years 4 months ago

How true it is...

I too have observed how we are being manuvered. Scarier if you look back into the history books on the uses of propaganda to promote what we think and want..great poem..