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IKnowNoBox
Sep 19, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

For Her (Erotic)

She makes me feel naughty

A little naughty,

so I do her dirty laundry

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 19, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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the_poet_tree

18 years 8 months ago

Hahaha

I like this...haiku, is it? I think it's pretty clever. Good stuff man.
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TheRealTearsICry

18 years 8 months ago

oh.

You are Naughty! will you do that for me? Please?
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RandomThoughts

18 years 3 months ago

Hahaha Funny and cute

Ya know I loved this one short and cute. Its sad to say you are 1 of 2 people here that I actually love getting comments from. :) Love you style and thoughts. Enjoy reading your stuff. Mad props to you. This one has caught my mind oh so short but embedded within me. CUTE! Got your point took no effort.
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 3 months ago

Thank you Random ...

feed back is important to improve ... everybody helps with me with insight some I except...and some I politely thank them for and then ignore ...the lenght of my poems is one thing that comes up a bit and now I have found my niche with lenght. In ink, Dabbler
professor

professor

18 years 3 months ago

Naughty

Definitely raise a wry smile this one and i could see the dirty laundry theme being extended very effectively should you wish to extend into a part 2. Keith
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 3 months ago

Thank you Professor ....

Part 2 hmmmmm....the laundry is piling up....lol I have a few poems centered around laundry I find laundry mats very interesting social gathering places...especially the one near the local campus...lol. In ink, dabbler