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IKnowNoBox
Sep 18, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A Trip...(acrostic)

to      New  horizons /vistas,that exist

          Outside the Box.

         Where  I truly

         hope to find  the

        elusive peace/place  were I can

        recover from

        Everything/it all.

     

 

      

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 18, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Frost Smith

Frost Smith

18 years 8 months ago

Very true...

There is a begining, the trip itself, and the end. "I took the one less travelled by, and that has made all the differrence" (Robert Frost) However; "The journey of a thousand miles begins with one step" (Chinesse proverb)
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JulieMcCarty

18 years 8 months ago

I have taken

many trips and have ended up NOWHERE myself but when I got back boy was I relaxed. :) I like this it made me smile. :) Julie
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Ink Dragon

18 years 8 months ago

acrostic allright...

but I can´t help feeling it could still be enhanced if you created sentence-like structures...has a kind of raw feeling to it right now...But I am very fond of the idea of titling it "A Trip" and spelling out "Nowhere"! Great! I would like to see a revised version soon, if you found the courage to alter it...I know it´s hard altering a piece, we grow so fond of them... Poetic regards, Ink Dragon
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

An excellent insightful suggestion ...

All my works are to be redone and polished they come from post-it notes and are jotted down in limited moments at a library comp. A look at my brevity,os also explained by this thank you for the Try-This,That's the greatest feed type of back. In ink, David