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Is this love?
Is this love?
That first look, that first spoken word
that first touch, that first thrilling thought
like the sweet melody of a bird
one's heart sings at the feelings “love” has brought
This melody is one of feelings, sensations
a wordless melody, one that only once touched by
the first trills of the sweet notes
will you feel the vibrations coursing through you body
you will feel that you are one with the universe
you will feel like you have the answers to all
the unanswered questions that you always wanted to know
you will be left with the thought that you are about to fall
a fall that will change your life
your very perception of what you thought life would be
this fall will cause you to open up and speak more freely
of your dreams, your secrets, your hearts very desires
you feel all these emotions in one
its like taking that first deep breath of fresh air
you know that no matter what has been said or done
you now have someone with whom you can share
first comes the love, the oneness in mind and soul
then comes union, the ultimate journey
which someday each one shall embark on
resulting in an all consuming explosion of life
Critiques
Frost Smith
18 years 8 months ago
A logical look at love...