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I so know and have witness this calm, Iridescent hesitance I'm a little foggy there. Can't be sure why(sometime your poetry whispers in the back of my head)Like a David Lynce Movie. I can't put it down until I absorb it.Which I always am able to do with most of your work. In ink, David ps.Ocular will give me paper cuts from my dictionary.lol

I find myself meditating on your poetry, Thanks, Mark

Being able to see anothers pain; even if it doesn't appear that they might want you to; Then setting your calm day aside too help them would be good. However, you said "face always in the cold," indicates too me that this person might be a drama queen playing coy to bait someone into listening to a constant sob story. I like to give a hand up, not a hand out; or if you prefer help those who help themselves. I like this alot not very long but you said alot

I have seen those eyes and been eaten. Again you astound me with the density of your imagery. I simply can't find fault or flaw in this. I tried, wanting to give useful feedback. cheers, Jess "Are we having fun yet?"

This is very sad Quills... It is so rich in language. Makes me think of Girl Interrupted or a few places I have been. Thanks for iridescent :-) Mark

from the point of view that I have never seen, although I have been the one behind these eyes for many years ... this is heartbreakingly beautiful. ~ Ronda