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IKnowNoBox
Sep 16, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Think Before you Insult

You best be prepared

if you so dare,

to demean

any man,

dirty with mange

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 16, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 10 months ago

dirty with mange ....

mange a person so dirty their hair is falling out. A person that has no self preservation and is already pestered by an itchy disposition. Thank you stay tuned. in ink, Dabbler
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Conect11

18 years 10 months ago

direct,

which is different than "to the point." This is direct, and true. Mark W.
Frost Smith

Frost Smith

18 years 10 months ago

Simple, to the point, and so very true...

Thats the problem; people don't think before they act, or react; I am very purposeful in what I do; thats not to say that I am not guilty of both, but I tend to have a bigger problem with reacting.
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 10 months ago

to demean

is to avoid understanding.Thank you for the visit to my poem. In ink, David
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 9 months ago

Thank you Cat

as a vet nurse I am sure you are aware how sensitive mange makes it's suffer. In ink, Dabbler
wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 9 months ago

Oh Yes...

Sensitive and sometimes the discomfort can make one angry... all the more reason to be kind and understanding. Best Wishes, Wolfy.

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