Love to Cry (acrostic)

Lovely little acrostic- Lesley

like the sudden impact of flowers on drowsy feilds and sleeping lawns i can too remember "falling" in love in lust in embrace fallin in there is no whole way to do it otherwise like jumping off the big rock at the swimming hole screaming the fresh lungful of air at birth togetherness someone there beautiful poem..O..

This is a beautifully written poem. True to form and it flows great. very good read : ) thanks for sharing

right they should be togther and together they are beautiful! Love it! :) Julie

this poem gave me such a wonderful feeling...these words put together in such a form really tickle you know...I really love this one...good work... " in the end, we will only just remember how it feels..."

Hey David I am fast becoming a huge fan of your writing and what you have to say just really speaks to my heart and soul!!!! Many thanks Kind regards Feebie Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)

know what falling in love feels like, and how rotten we feel when it ends? You managed to find very creative new words for it. Great imagery, too! The best of your pieces I´ve read so far! Poetic regards, Ink Dragon

I really liked this one.Loved the title,too.Very poetic , Lacy,

Nice write, Dabbler. Wolfy.

Just wow