IKnowNoBox

Sep 16, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Love to Cry (acrostic)

Soft
Innocent
Little
Kisses

Remembering
One
Single
Evening
Smiling

A
Romantic
Embrace

Feelings
Of
Release

Letting
Our
Visions
Entwine

Torn
Endangered
And
Running
Swiftly

Against
Restrictive
Entanglements

Falling
On
Rocks

Swimming
Our
Raging
Rivers
Of
Wonder

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 16, 2007

About the Author

Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

Critiques

pinksheep

18 years 6 months ago

your acrostic

Lovely little acrostic- Lesley

IKnowNoBox

18 years 6 months ago

like the sudden impact of flowers on drowsy feilds and sleeping lawns i can too remember "falling" in love in lust in embrace fallin in there is no whole way to do it otherwise like jumping off the big rock at the swimming hole screaming the fresh lungful of air at birth togetherness someone there beautiful poem..O..

IKnowNoBox

18 years 10 months ago

From the

Waters Of My Beginning Thank you, David

wbluerose02

18 years 10 months ago

The words you have pinned onto this paper very enjoyable

I have enjoyed this write not many you will see within the words spoken. I will read more of your words you pin and thank you for sharing with my family and I.

IKnowNoBox

18 years 10 months ago

Toward the Horizion...

and beyond .Escape Artist one and all. in ink, David

IKnowNoBox

18 years 10 months ago

O you inpired a poem ....

Thank you it is "The Journey..." In Ink, David

iluvblu4e595

18 years 10 months ago

review

This is a beautifully written poem. True to form and it flows great. very good read : ) thanks for sharing

IKnowNoBox

18 years 10 months ago

Thank you

Lover of Blue. in ink David

JulieMcCarty

18 years 10 months ago

You are

right they should be togther and together they are beautiful! Love it! :) Julie

IKnowNoBox

18 years 10 months ago

If more things could come together ,

we could move Toward the Horizons and Beyond to seek the Elusive Peace. in Ink, David

Eveliina

18 years 10 months ago

Feeling good

this poem gave me such a wonderful feeling...these words put together in such a form really tickle you know...I really love this one...good work... " in the end, we will only just remember how it feels..."

IKnowNoBox

18 years 9 months ago

Thank You Eveliina, The acrostic style ...

is one that came to me while on a hitchhiking adventure(in school i used it to memorize books for book reports ). At the time I didn't even know it was a style of poetry.lol In ink, David

Jillian Botha

18 years 9 months ago

"Together like they should be" indeed!!!"

Hey David I am fast becoming a huge fan of your writing and what you have to say just really speaks to my heart and soul!!!! Many thanks Kind regards Feebie Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)

IKnowNoBox

18 years 9 months ago

Thank You Tamer of Goloms

Iron Golom The Molten Core Beast Monolithic Construct *** With a pass of a Plume Fair Fairy Tickled Beast to Rest. In crayon, Dabbler ps Your Prize fairy?Why Chocolate...maybe?

Ink Dragon

18 years 9 months ago

Don´t we all...

know what falling in love feels like, and how rotten we feel when it ends? You managed to find very creative new words for it. Great imagery, too! The best of your pieces I´ve read so far! Poetic regards, Ink Dragon

IKnowNoBox

18 years 9 months ago