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A Royal Hand

    The ante? Christ  

    The Devil folds,

    Atheist  is Bluffin’

    

       

      

     

 

 

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 16, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

What Puncuation...

Would work best after ante? Maybe a comma? The ante,Christ...(hum)? a possible ending...Souls lost,or Souls will be won Souls will be lost it takes a village! Thinking in ink. Boxless