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SAKTHEEE2007
Sep 15, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Nothing

 Nothing
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Nothing we are in this world and
nothing we are before His plays
Fate and it’s role is great in life
Our brain and knowledge is nothing.
You may plan to go to Mars too but
you cannot go even to a next corner
He has to come and He has to bless
Even to swallow your mouthful food
You may dream to capture the moon but
you and u r efforts have to be blessed to win
Time has to permit even to sit and stand.
Time, fate are the other names of His Almighty
Nothing we are here to say and to be proud
It is the great thing in the span of our life
Add That thing to conquer and win
Please His heart,to win everything

Sakthi Ravichandran

— SAKTHEEE2007, Sep 15, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

Sakthee, your language and poetry have improved immensely

since I first met you. But have to say that while very spiritual, I am deeply anti-religious. I disagree with your content entirely. We make our own choices. If we were all in Gods hands how do you explain the devastation he imposes through natural disasters? cheers, Jess
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Conect11

18 years 8 months ago

Ah, Sakkthee!

I was very impressed with this beautiful piece. It reminds me how God is very patient with and blesses us little arrogant humans. I love the line "Time, fate are the other names of His Almighty" though perhaps because of the context "fate" should be capitalized. The line about Mars, excellent! I actually feel that about myself sometimes, I want to do great things, but can't even put my socks on right, lol! Thanks for such an honest, refreshing read! Mark W.