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Sep 14, 2007
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A Secret!
This story’s in my mind and I’ve
heard that I am clever.
I want to write a poem just to
say I wrote a
poem about the fact I wrote a poem
on exactly the same subject.
Everyday I find it in
my brain, stuck in place, indeed.
Is this where it belongs? No! My words
shine like a billion little flashbulbs.
Not the halogen
or the flourescent
types of light,
an example of our
need for illumination.
a crostich from my wife, though she’s never known to sew. A
comforter I wrap myself up in.
rest tonight, son, go to bed early. Soon enough you’ll see the night be
over.
Soon enough you’ll see it is
time to rise, time to grow
in the soft sun of the
cold autumn morning.
— Conect11, Sep 14, 2007
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Critiques
IKnowNoBox
18 years 8 months ago
How do you do such as you do with the transitions to ...
weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
The lights that light my life
Conect11
18 years 8 months ago
thanks guys!
IKnowNoBox
18 years 8 months ago
Missed the second.
IKnowNoBox
18 years 8 months ago
Missed the second.
Quillsvein1
18 years 8 months ago
gorgeous
Quillsvein1
18 years 8 months ago
gorgeous
weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
Aaw man,
JulieMcCarty
18 years 8 months ago
I must say