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A Secret!

  This story’s in my mind and I’ve heard that I am clever. I want to write a poem just to say I wrote a   poem about the fact I wrote a poem on exactly the same subject. Everyday I find it in my brain, stuck in place, indeed.   Is this where it belongs? No! My words shine like a billion little flashbulbs.   Not the halogen or the flourescent types of light,   an example of our need for illumination.   a crostich from my wife, though she’s never known to sew. A comforter I wrap myself up in. rest tonight, son, go to bed early. Soon enough you’ll see the night be over. Soon enough you’ll see it is time to rise, time to grow in the soft sun of the cold autumn morning.    
— Conect11, Sep 14, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

The lights that light my life

are the onces I see when I shut my eyes or look at the stars. Adored the last stanza could possibly do with a line break in "rest tonight, son, go to bed early. Soon enough you’ll see the night be over."? cheers, Jess
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Quillsvein1

18 years 8 months ago

gorgeous

last two lines there--i'd give my right arm to have written that. the cycle of night and day, poetry and strain, sending your boy to bed. great job.
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Quillsvein1

18 years 8 months ago

gorgeous

last two lines there--i'd give my right arm to have written that. the cycle of night and day, poetry and strain, sending your boy to bed. great job.
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

Aaw man,

you know I hate secrets like acrostics and crossword puzzles Tell me the answer by message cheers, Jess
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JulieMcCarty

18 years 8 months ago

I must say

this is cool as hell!! I have never seen this kind of poem before until tonight. I hope my brain can do something like this. I did catch both of the secrets in this one. I love puzzles! Thanx, Julie