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A Friend in need

A Friend in need

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Every attempts to have a friendship

are the attempts  to keep ourself for a long in this world

Every friend in this life

are the sweet notes of happiest moments

is the friendship only to enjoy and entertain?

are to spend money in gallaries

It is to way to share our love and grief too and

it is the way to reduce our grieves too

To double our happy and glee

share with your friend.

To keep yourself young and charm

have a friend to share your thoughts

To have a protection from all evils

select a good friend from your circle

 

SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN

 

 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Sep 13, 2007

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Michael Landau

18 years 8 months ago

It is a very important to

It is a very important to have friends. They help us through the most difficult times. They share the moments of our lives, both good and bad.
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

I love the line

"To double our happy and glee" and really appreciate your sincerity and open heart. Your english is getting better too, but I don't want to give you specific feedback on that, sometimes it seems it allows you a more creative approach and honesty. may I call you brother? Jess
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SAKTHEEE2007

18 years 8 months ago

Dear jess

Thank you for your open comments sorry to my late response to your comments you can call me brother by all means with love Sakthee