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A Risky Business

Mood Swing Set
with a downward spiral
a titter taughter
perfect for a pity partier

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 13, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Mark

Mark

18 years 8 months ago

Why not

call it A Risky Business as to party with pity certainly is. Mood Swing Set lmao whare did that come from ? I likes much Titter taughter? Secrative Lunatic? this I'm not sure of - do tell been here 10 minutes now rotf mark
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

Crazy is as

Crazy changes socks if they are the same type.....well put W.E.