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Seclusion

 

Vanquished from the flock long ago.

 

Yearning for intimacy yet limitations sustain.

 

Isolation welcomed amid tranquil waters.

 

Solitude allows for pondering the whys of life.

 

 
— Tuttey, Sep 13, 2007

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Mark

Mark

18 years 9 months ago

I would bet

I would bet your friend was very happy with it Tuttey. Your Poetry really is quite nice. That apostrophy with whys looks complicated. I may be wrong and probably am but would it not be simply - whys of life? whys being plural and life being life. Or are you saying the why is of life - grrrr punctuation is so fluid yes? Thank you, Mark
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Tuttey

18 years 8 months ago

Thank You

Yes you are right it would be whys thank you. That's what I get for using spell check and not checking the spell check. lol
Mark

Mark

18 years 8 months ago

Is It Not A Mind?

I have a spell checker to check me after the spell checker checks because sombody is always watching my spieling. :-) Cheers, Mark