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Hang

            as for today

            hanging in

              so when

    there are falling-outs

          I   h

                  o

                    p

                  e

      for  a cozy landing

 

 

 

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 13, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Conect11

18 years 9 months ago

you've

made good use of these special little ditty's. I like your cleverness with your technique. Mark W.