Hang

as for today

hanging in

so when

there are falling-outs

I h

for a cozy landing

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 13, 2007

Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

18 years 10 months ago

made good use of these special little ditty's. I like your cleverness with your technique. Mark W.

18 years 10 months ago

for stopping by. In ink, David

18 years 10 months ago

Very nice structure use with the word hope, thats f-ing awesome, but if it were me I would take out the word not, hang high

18 years 9 months ago

with a rude bump. Thanks for the ride anyway. cheers, Jess

18 years 9 months ago

until something comes of it.

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