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A Thought for You

I thought of you last night

how the stars twinkled when you smile,

how even though you’re all grown up

you’ve never lost your inner child;

 

how even though times have been hard

your sense of humor has prevailed,

and even when against all odds

your private outlook’s never failed.

 

I wish that I could be like you

to spark in others, inner light

you’re the sunshine in our days

and the beacon in our nights.

 

I felt your presence the other day

through all the problems and the strife,

and thought, how lucky I am to know

someone who adds so much to life.

— docmaverick, Sep 13, 2007

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

I smile at the sentiment

there are just a few people I know who make the world a better place just by existing. But man, I don't want to get boring on this, but it does come across a bit Hallmarky, sorry cheers, Jess
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Antoinette Mar…

18 years 7 months ago

i thought of you

Sorry I have to disagree...it's not Hall markee to me..it is sincere thoughts from a clear mind..it's nice to have those kinds of thoughts...we all need a few more of them...
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Antoinette Mar…

18 years 7 months ago

i thought of you

Sorry I have to disagree...it's not Hall markee to me..it is sincere thoughts from a clear mind..it's nice to have those kinds of thoughts...we all need a few more of them...