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Sep 12, 2007
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The Girl
I was there
the moment you were born,
when you were placed
in a warm incubator.
With you
Little Flower
with unshed lanugo
and cream in your creases
for me to pick out,
for me to wipe clean.
I was there
when you opened your eyes
and went kicking and screaming
into a larger world.
A stork bitten girl,
a victory sign?
Indeed, victory,
you of chubby cheeks
and you, beloved.
What’s not to admire?
You laugh at my jokes,
and smile when you see me,
an instant connection:
"Hi, dad!"
in an unclear voice.
I am a mist
upon first listen,
I am a mist
up through the vents and windows.
Kisses, kisses,
chew on the tummy and the chin.
Giggle, baby.
You are loved.
Forget this not.
— Conect11, Sep 12, 2007
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IKnowNoBox
18 years 9 months ago
Can I feel as a father without one becoming?
Mark
18 years 9 months ago
Yeah
barbsdad2003
18 years 9 months ago
A Wonderful Piece
SAKTHEEE2007
18 years 8 months ago
Nice Description
weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
You are a true poet