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a huge sex problem

 

it’s true! it’s true!—

and not just point of view—

 

neurotic Freud had such!

a huge sex problem,

 

one indeed p’raps could’ve,

if one p’raps would’ve,

 

with assistance much

of a polluting, competent 

careering crew,

 

been predisposed to drive

a monster truck through …

 

and through and through …

 

and through …

and through and through.

 

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Conect11

18 years 7 months ago

think

you need one more beat in the second line of the poem. Perhaps the word "in?" I do like the punctuation after Freud, and love the repetitious end, much like sex, lol. Mark W.
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barbsdad2003

18 years 7 months ago

Sorry, Mark

I'm trying to figure out what you're saying. The intent is for not/point/view to be the accents. Adding another syllable in that line to my mind throws it off. Maybe I'm missing something. Thanx, Chuck