April

My heart breaks

thinking of you in this beautiful box

with its marble and brass

your "forever" earth home

My last words were " I Love you"

Did you hear me?

Could you feel me by your bedside

rubbing your beautiful hair ,that I have now

neatly in a bag on my dresser

The only part of the real you I have left

MY HEART BREAKS

thinking of you in this beautiful box

with its marble and brass

your "forever" earth home

18 years 7 months ago

is that I am an empath. Your loss touches me so deeply I can not say a word about your poetry. cheers, Jess

18 years 7 months ago

You did not ask for feedback, I must say that the use of capitals "MY HEART BREAKS" was powerful

18 years 7 months ago

Sigh..... In Ink, David

18 years 7 months ago

I appreciate all of you.