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Sep 11, 2007
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An old devil and a lovely angel
An old devil and a lovely angel
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It was a dark night of december
none was there to talk and walk
Myself was placed to guard that place
cause that was a place of violence
The air was too chill and the mist was so high
There i saw that cruel devil with a lovely child
He might be sevnty and more but
that kid my seven or eight
She was in his arms on sleep but
he was trying to rape it
That innocent cried due to pain and fear
I was alerted by that cry and cught in a second
My cane brought the facts that he was it’s master
I took that angel to a safety place and
beaten him to run for a long way.
SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN AN INDIAN ENGLISH POET
— SAKTHEEE2007, Sep 11, 2007
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barbsdad2003
18 years 9 months ago
Ravi!
weirdelf
18 years 9 months ago
I once saw a woman getting beaten by a huge man.
IKnowNoBox
18 years 8 months ago
When one does not turn away