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An old devil and a lovely angel

An old devil and a lovely angel

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It was a dark night of december

none was there to talk and walk

Myself was placed to guard that place

cause that was a place of violence

The air was too chill and the mist was so high

There i saw that cruel devil with a lovely child

He might be sevnty and more but

that kid my seven or eight

She was in his arms on sleep  but

he was trying to rape it

That innocent cried due to pain and fear

I was alerted by that cry and cught in a second

My cane brought the facts that he was it’s master

I took that angel to a safety place and

beaten him to run for a long way.

 

SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN AN INDIAN ENGLISH POET

 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Sep 11, 2007

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barbsdad2003

18 years 9 months ago

Ravi!

Again a great narrative. Although again I wish you projected at least a glimsworth of better command of English. But lest I come across as a prickled nitpick, I must submit this vignette wings high by itself ... as is. Thank you, Grandpa PS: Methinks the jerk didn't get nearly as much as he deserved.
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weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

I once saw a woman getting beaten by a huge man.

There were not thoughts of bravery or courage, I Simply could not watch it happen. I told my girlfriend to get her to a safe place then yelled at him "Only a man with no penis hits a woman!" then ran liked hell. He didn't catch me, (he would have killed me if he had) but the woman got to a hospital and a womans shelter. I am not proud, sometimes the only way to be human is to be human. I salute you, brother. cheers, Jess
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

When one does not turn away

wheather we phsically intervene or intervene by voice .Then such Decadent Sickos shall have no place to go but back to the Mires of Excrament they origin from. Demons beware your pen,SAKHI as this turd wore your cane. Kind Regards, David