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For you, my daughter......
For you, my daughter......
Her first smile in the morning
strikes me in the gut without warning
her bright blue eyes seem to stare directly into me
right down to the very core of my soul
to see her happy is my constant mission
to help her long desired dreams realize fruition
this is what will make me feel content
knowing this for me is my gift wrapped present
her constant trickle of laughter that echoes
through the halls of time
her musical giggles ring so innocent, so true
a balm to my soul, especially when its brought on by what i do
she is my gift, one that i will surely treasure
one that knows no value or measure
one that will exist in my heart for all eternity
for as long as i have air in my lungs and life in my body
she is, you see my daughter, my baby
and for me there is no perhaps, later or maybe
she will always come first in my life
Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 9 months ago
Again I think left aligned would work better
JulieMcCarty
18 years 8 months ago
Hello Feebie
JulieMcCarty
18 years 8 months ago
and
Jillian Botha
18 years 8 months ago
i will take it home this weekend...
weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
A lot of us