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A Message From The East

My salvo

boot heels showering the steps
off the plane

my clicking morse code
a panic plea to Heaven.
 

My salvo

one hand given me,
to millions perhaps;
palm sweating bullets
and floodlight nightmares i
hoped continents
might wake from
before this.

My salvo

an infant’s head struck a
split drum screaming the
brownshirts on as
goosestepping vermin
squirm in torch light.

My salvo

i hear the throat
that roars bleeding granite,
burning magnets drawing
us into fields of barbed wire,
snakes, and starved bodies
limp with a last twitched jerk
of hate

just down the hall

(later you can find me around the Bendlerblock)

My salvo.

i will leave this love bomb
smile with golden teeth
wrenched by all of our hands
and allow them, for once,
to see beyond chimney smoke
through this eye which
can no longer see
and no longer
wants to.

Here, Mein Fuhrer.
I have a message for you
from the East

 

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Conect11

18 years 8 months ago

now

I'm darned impressed with several parts of this, quills. I love your opening two salvos, blunt, urgent, and true. For me the third is a touch obscure, perhaps you could explain this one for me? As always your use of language is exquisite as you make beautiful a violent and bloody act, and I'm smiling sweetly at the closing, which has a dark and disturbing beauty. Mark W.
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Quillsvein1

18 years 8 months ago

thank

you so much for your understanding of somewhat grim--but at the same time very hopeful, in a sense that is understood only by readers of a certain disposition--the third stanza is a poetic first person narrative re-enactment of what Stauffenberg most likely heard when he approached Hitler's conference room with the briefcase bomb (Hitler screaming about a failing military conquest). his voice. the Bendlerblock is the street in Germany on which Stauffenberg was executed when Hitler survived the blast by a hare. there's a memorial there with a bust of a young man held in chains and the inscription of his last words: "Long Live a Holy Germany".
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Spirit Song

18 years 7 months ago

Impactful!

A very strong and masterfully delivered write. Your word artistry is awesome! This one hit right to the core. You sure know how to paint it on the page Poet! Take this all to heart Quills...and remember EGO is the dark ruler. Blessings from Hawaii, Jerry It is said there are two ways of doing things The right way and the wrong way I believe there is a third way A NEW WAY JVS
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weirdelf

18 years 7 months ago

Do you remember

Do you remember how I used to whinge for more guts and rawness in your poetry? Well you have delivered. Thankyou. This is not the first, just taking a moment to appreciate the growth you have shown here. Not only powerful visually and emotionally but instructively as well. What else could poetry aspire to? As it reads I think it could possibly use some stanza breaks before each "My Salvo" incidentally did your know that Aussies would automatically interpret "salvo" as a member of the charitable christian group "The Salvation Army"? Maybe that's exactly what you meant, but if not, don't be too disturbed, despite their militaristic name they are mostly benevolent and like dressing up in uniforms and playing great, well.. sometimes good, band music cheers, Jess
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Quillsvein1

18 years 7 months ago

Thank you Jess!

you've inspired me quite a bit since the fateful day that i registered for this site. and no, i don't mind one bit being associated with the australian salvation army. :)