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Mom

Left alone she pictures things

as she’d like for them to be,

but she’s quite aware of everything

going on in her family.

Attempts are made to teach us

and guide us to what is right,

in hopes we’ll learn each lesson

and act accordingly when out of sight.

But choices and situations

can overwhelm us in the end,

and poor decisions and consequences

will try and teach us once again.

Whether she is proud of you

or disappointed just the same,

her eyes may show the difference

but she’ll never curse your name;

her quiet grace won’t let her

even though she’ll lose her calm,

she has a special kind of love for you

that’s why God made her Mom.

— docmaverick, Sep 05, 2007

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Prototype

18 years 9 months ago

Hey

Nice poem. A Mom never give up, right? I think you brought up some really great points.
JB

Jillian Botha

18 years 9 months ago

You did it again Doc!!!

Hi Doc Your words reach into my heart and capture it with each poem of yours that i have read!!!!! This is truly what every mom is like. "Whether she is proud of you or disappointed just the same, her eyes may show the difference but she’ll never curse your name; her quiet grace won’t let her" Oh boy how true this line is!! Thank you so much!! Kind regards Feebie Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)