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Sep 05, 2007
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Without you
Without you
With you, I never stood alone
With you I was not a person on my own
With you I became a possession
For me, you became my obsession
Now I find myself being able to stand alone
Without you, I am a person on my own
A vibrant someone, a passionate someone
Things that I have discovered along the way
Have changed me more each passing day
So it is without you, I look forward
Without you, I move closer toward
My future, leaving my past behind
Free from you and your constant control
Free to fly and learn new things
About the others around me, without you
To hold me back, tell me what to do
Without you to cage my soul. And my mind
Without you is where I am
Without you is where I will remain
— Feebie, Sep 05, 2007
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docmaverick
18 years 9 months ago
This was a good read, for me...
Jillian Botha
18 years 9 months ago
I do not mind at al
IKnowNoBox
18 years 9 months ago
Power to you!
Nilmini
18 years 1 month ago
Feebie, I love your spirit