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TO A SUPPRESSED
WITH MORE PAINS AND ANGER THIS POEM HAS WRITTEN
TO RAISE FROM ALL FOOLISH THOUGHTS
TO A SUPPRESSED
TO A SUPPRESSED
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She was just twelve or thirteen and
her pays didn’t changed from her face
A natural change in her organs,
They declared to a function and
celebrated her shy in that place
She was in the peak of confusion and
in a state of mixed emotions.
Every one became teacher and taught
to their knowledge and to their experience
She was compelled to forget the past and
her friends Keerthi and Panneer too
She was remodeled as new to this land
The change in her dress and her walks
seperated her from her present pleasures
The old and rotten customs have pulled her
from all her success
She placed in the corner of that roof with a garland
viewed and showed her as a victimised goat at a pit
Thousand Bharathi’s and Gandhi’s will do
nothing to her and to her race
SakthiRavichandran
Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
I really get your pain and anger here, Sakthi